The Sun rose over the small ocean whitecaps.The gulls punctuated the light orange sky as if they were the ellipsis in a sentence of some forgotten deity.
From the west, the last nightly stars twinkled a slow good bye.
The mind was appeased by caresses of soft tendrils of indolence.
Now, the fluence of Nirvana closed over itself giving room to nothingness.
The music is a fragment of "Waiting Sunrise" by Mark Enfroy.
© 2013 Od Liam.
Very nice...the music added to the mood.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Patricia!
DeleteI do appreciate your words!
Feel at home here!
Very nice, YOU ARE AN AMAZING PLAYER OF WORDS :)
ReplyDeleteHello, Auntie!
DeleteI am so happy this looks nice for you!
Humm, it is a bit troubling to be felt as a punster, looks as if one think: Let him speak, and he will sell a fridge to an Inuit... ha ha ha, just kidding, Auntie!
I do appreciate your words! Thank you!!
I picture everything said here and there's a pleasant sense of happiness especially thinking of Nirvana. Your sentences are so aptly written for this title. A beautiful take!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Od, for sharing. :)
Thank YOU, BB!
DeleteI did feel at bliss while I was writing this five sentences.
The tide with its white noise prepares the senses to be ultimately sunk into the wonderful loss of all sentience.
My pleasure, BB!
Very poetic. Interesting way to set a mood, even without a character in the story.
ReplyDeleteYou are right!
DeleteI guess I always thought these kind of states, as bliss, and ecstasy, as something with no subject.
It is a kind of universal force that possesses us not the other way around.
Thank you for thinking it is a poetic way to describe it!
I like this beautiful way you've set the mood.
ReplyDeletePerfect prompt for a Sunday :)
Thank you, and welcome!
DeleteI appreciate your word!
Oh my gosh this is such a beautiful piece!I love the tranquil mood you have set, the lush description that drips from every line. Gorgeous!
ReplyDeletePS I may have to, at some point, pinch some of the second line; such a vivid picture! x
Thank you so much, Lizzie!
DeleteWelcome to my blog!
Help yourself, please! I am honoured!
WOW! How could anyone not feel bliss after experiencing this?
ReplyDeleteWelcome Dobson!
ReplyDeleteIt is good of you to visit my blog!
Thank you, for your warm words. I did aim to make the experience of ecstasy a universal feeling!
Feel at home, here!
Very well written Od, but that's not new to you as you're an expert at this. You're so good at getting so much out of so few words.
ReplyDeletePS: I'm sorry I couldn't hear the music on some of the posts, but that's down to my browser. I have to keep changing around to hear it, but I know you are brilliant at getting the perfect music for what you are writing.
Brilliant post.
Thank you, RPD!
DeleteYour words are fresh air for me!
There are some issues about music hosts, maybe because they are free? I can't afford paid ones! :)
I am changing them, looking for a good one! :(
Thanks again!!!
Relaxing bliss, enjoying only those things that cost nothing but the slight effort of letting you go and experience the calmness and the nature around you.
ReplyDeleteYes, that is the very idea, Pris!
DeleteLet the easy and costless things impregnate your soul with the miracle of beauty.